Thursday, 10 January 2013

Legacy - Children's Plot

As a continuation to last week's post, here is the Children generation plot:


Plot – Children
Both couples have a kid, Nigel and Diamond have Glasses-Chan Rayne. Sammael and Lilith have the young and angsty Deacon. Sammael finds that he is in a losing battle with the demon to control his body, and heads for the hills so as to not put anyone in danger. Lilith retires from the Sleeping Dragons to raise the child by herself, and joins a group of traveling gypsies. Needless to say, she basically fails at this, and Deacon ends up being quite a delinquent, and on his way to a life of crime.

Rayne is lovingly raised by both her parents, trains hard, learns well, and sees the world. Needless to say, she's got a stick so far up her ass she has trouble swallowing.

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The two kids meet as Lilith's caravan is nearby Diamond's dojo, mostly by sheer coincidence. Deacon is lofting around as is his nature, smoking in an empty field, when Rayne, as is her nature, feels the need to correct his delinquent ways and relieve him of the cigarette. The two engage in a battle of wills, and each experiences something they never have before – real competition. Their spar ends, and the cigarette is forgotten by both parties, each distracted by having made their first friend.

I want to make a note that Diamond is pregnant. Just saying...

Deacon begins spending time at the Dojo, and meets Nigel and Diamond and effectively abandons his mother. He begins training with them, and is found to be unusually astute with magic. After a while, the issue of Deacon's father comes up, and the (GC's family name)s figure out that the deviant boy they have come to like so much is none other than the son of the intrepid couple they had allied themselves with so many years earlier. Nigel grows concerned about Deacon, as he examines the boy and senses a demonic presence in him. He attempts an exorcism on Deacon, but fails to explain himself adequately to Deacon beforehand, and as such, Nigel's exorcism fails, as Deacon is not possessed, but simply has the blood of demons in him, and in doing so, it burns and injures Deacon terribly, who escapes and maims Nigel in the process. (I'm thinking a couple slashes across the face should be adequate, parallel like, from a single blow; along eye and cheek)

Deacon gets out of there like a bat out of hell, and runs into Rayne, who was roused by the ruckus. Deacon is injured, and Nigel's failed exorcism has brought out some of the demon in him. He explains to Rayne that her father had done something to him, and that he was getting out of there ASAP to get some answers out of his own mother. Rayne goes with him, oblivious to her father's perils (luckily though, Diamond is there to tend to his wounds).

The two children make their way to the gypsy camp, and prepare a one-on-one with Lilith. She is devastated to see elements of the Demon in Deacon. The three of them share some exposition, and they decide to track down Sammael. Lilith breaks out her assassins tools for the first time in years, and they head out.

[Deacon is a bit taken aback about his parents; he had never really thought much of his good old mum, and here she is a deadly assassin; he had always assumed his father had been someone worthwhile, a noble passing through perhaps, who happened to impregnate his mother, but was never really interested in her]

They head into the mountains to the shrine where Sammael is supposed to reside. The shrine itself is small and isolated, manned by a single aging monk by the name of Odis. Within the back rooms of the shrine lies the portal to Sammael's prison. It is a simple caged door made of wood with a thin silver coating that is beginning to chip in some places. On either side of the bars is a chess board, which the warden monk explains they use to play against each other to pass the time.

When they meet Sammael, he is calm and civil, Odis goes in first to meet him, followed by Deacon, while the women wait outside. Sammael is at this point completely oblivious as to the identity of the boy, and asks him who he is. Deacon approaches his father and calmly explains their relationship, alongside a swift sucker-punch to the stomach. Both of these serve to wind and stun poor Sammael. Odis runs to help Sammael up, and begins telling off Deacon for his rashness.

[as a side note, the cave is made up mostly of hematite, a type of iron ore, which acts to nullify demonic powers]

Deacon begins to tell his father off, mostly for not being there his entire life. Sammael is beginning to piece together things, and figures out Lilith is his mother. He is concerned as to why she wouldn't have come along with him, and fears that she has died in the intervening years, only to find out that she is in the next room.

Sammael runs to the window and ....
<summary>
-lilith enters the room and gives Sammael a fresh one (punch to the stomach); he comments on her fiery spirit, and she on his thoughtlessness
...skipping ahead...

-lilith tells him that she wishes he never had himself possessed
-sammael tells her that he had to make the sacrifice for the greater good
-she regrets him doing it, as it has separated them for all these years, stating her disregard for the greater good, that she would have preferred he not make the sacrifice in his thoughtlessness for her
[one complex love/duty explanation later]
-sammael takes lilith into an embrace, looks deeply into her eyes, and steals both a kiss and a throwing knife, and proceeds to stab her in the spine, then hurl the knife at Odis, and bolts out of there before anyone can realize what is going on
</summary>

Completely stunned by what has just happened, Deacon tends to his mother, and Rayne, at Deacon's request looks at Odis. Lilith is badly wounded, and Odis is dead. Lilith is taking surprisingly well, she jokes that she wouldn't want to survive this wound anyway, to live on as an invalid. Deacon is basically just devastated, he doesn't know what to make of the situation, and is running out of time, he sends Rayne to look for medical supplies or something to help Lilith. He desperately asks his mother what he should do; she tells him not to cry, that he has to be strong. She pulls his ear close and whispers into his ear that he must kill his father, who is no longer the man he once was, he is only now a plague upon the world, a soulless two-faced monster that must be destroyed. Deacon sobers up significantly upon hearing this, and asks what she would have him do.

Seeing herself mortally wounded, Lilith charges her son with vanquishing this demon, the ancient enemy of the Sleeping Dragon clan, and bestows her Sleeping Dragon medallion to him, telling him that he is the only one who can do this. It isn't explained fully, but his inhuman nature makes him immune to demonic possession, which is the key to making the demon stay dead. She tells you the name of a man who can help you, Adam Dormien, a powerful officer in the Sleeping Dragon Clan. She tells you to look for him at [tavern name] a tavern in the city.

<brief> Shortly afterwards Lilith dies, and they have an impromptu funeral for both Lilith and Odis, burying the both of them out front of the shrine.</brief>

<summary> they make it to the tavern, and after a brief stint of not being able to get in due to being underage, they meet Adamas, who upon sensing Deacon's demonic nature, and the revealing of Lilith's medallion, he mistakes Deacon for the Demon, assuming that the Demon has escaped Sammael's custody and possessed this boy instead.</summary>

Deacon manages to overpower Adamas, and he begins apologizing to himself and his sister for failing to avenge her. Deacon retorts that if his sister means so much to him, attacking his nephew isn't a great way to make up for this. Adamas is taken back, and Deacon explains that if Adamas is Lilith's brother, then Adam is his uncle.

Their conflict abruptly ends, and they make amends over drinks (Rayne has tea). Eventually, Deacon gets to the point; they are here to solicit his, (and through him the Sleeping Dragon Clan's) help in the hunt for his father. Adamas levels with him, that he doesn't think he will get much help from the Sleeping Dragons. Needless to say, the kids are outraged.

Adamas begins to explain; within the Sleeping Dragon Clan, there exist several aggregate factions, though the only ones of interest to them are the Purists, who believe in keeping the bloodline of Draco Dormien alive, and the Bureaucrats, a nickname for those who do things by the books. The Purists were well supported in past mainly due to Lilith's skills; she had always been the more powerful of the two Dormien children, and after her defection, this group lost most of its supporters, seeing only the pushover Adamas left of the ancestral blood.

<<In actuality, Adamas is more capable than he believes. He would usually ally himself with Lilith, and the two of them would accomplish great things, but without her morale support, Adamas couldn't seem to do much on his own. He gradually lost confidence in himself, and went from being a hopeful Fang to a contact person in a location of only minor importance. >>

[Contact Person – used to pass on critical information between clansmen and occasionally locals/outsiders/mercenaries, usually in a static position]
[Fang – a sort of elite within the Sleeping Dragon Clan (Lilith probably would have been promoted to a fang if she hadn't left the Clan, she wasn't necessarily the best, but she was a rising star and was of the bloodline)
I don't know if I really want to include the term Fang or an equivalent in the game....]>>

Which leaves him fairly powerless within the Clan, combined with the fact that Deacon's demonic nature will probably get them attacked on sight, does not leave them in a very favourable position to be asking for help.


  • The kids then proceed to inspire Adamas with Lilith's faith in him in to get help from the Clan
  • He proceeds to steal the compass that will lead them to the Legacy sword
  • He neglects to mention that it is stolen
  • They proceed to the location, and meet some clansmen who are guarding the sword, who are waiting for them
  • Adamas steps forward to negotiate its procurement
  • He tries various arguments, centrally that the sword is the rightful inheritance of his bloodline
  • The guards reject his appeals, telling him that the ancestral bloodline is broken, and that the sword is a historical artifact to the Sleeping Dragon Clan
    • Note that the Ancestral Sword is bloodbound, meaning it can only be wielded by the one with its binder's blood in their veins
    • Technically, it doesn't have to be, but it is beneficial, and assumed to be
  • Deacon interrupts them, asking if all their Clansmen are like them
  • They answer affirmatively, the Clan is filled with great warriors
  • Deacon responds: good, then I don't have to hesitate before opposing them; and attacks them, killing them both
  • Rayne and Adamas are a little stunned at the double homicide
  • Deacon justifies that they are on a righteous mission, whereas his opponents were cowardly dogs of men who would rather protect a relic that is useless to them than put it to use in their rightful hands; that they knew that they were seeking out their oldest foe, and still they opposed him, simply out of prejudice of his demonic nature
  • Adamas sheepishly interjects that they might not have known about their mission, as he never really told the Clan about it
  • Rayne asks how he managed to get the compass without revealing that
  • Adamas admits that he stole the compass
  • Finding themselves a band of thieves, outcasts, traitors, and murderers, they proceed to retrieve the Ancestral Sword on a sour note

Next comes the great question of how to find the demon Sammael. Their original plan to use the Clan's information network essentially died along with the guards, and so they are forced to come up with alternate means. They begin debating how to find the demon, when Adamas mentions that it was Rayne's father who helped track down the demon when Sammael fought it.

Rayne is surprised to learn this, and asks how Adamas would know such a thing. He attributes it to his membership within the Clan, well, former membership I suppose.

With that, they head back to where they started; Diamond's dojo. Wanting to avoid any trouble with the Sleeping Dragons, they avoid the main roads on the way back.

They arrive, and are greeted by one of Diamond's students. Because of their scruffy appearances, she doesn't recognize them, and attempts to dismiss them, telling them that the dojo is not accepting challengers right now.

Rayne makes her presence known, and tells the girl that she is the daughter of the dojo's masters, and a world of trouble awaits the second year student that gets in her way. The girl quickly submits to Rayne's authority, and they quickly find themselves in audience with Diamond, while the girl runs off to summon Nigel.

Diamond almost immediately breaks into tears, hugging Rayne and detailing how happy she is that her daughter made it back safely; Rayne meanwhile is trying to console her mother with her well-being, and that she only left out of concern for Deacon. Upon hearing his name, Diamond tearfully goes over and hugs him as well, this time detailing how worries she was about him, after what she had heard happened from Nigel.

Diamond slowly regains her composure as the kids hug and reassure her. Deacon introduces her to Adamas, who has been standing awkwardly by the door all this time. Adamas identifies himself as Deacon's uncle, and Diamond responds that she is Rayne's mother. They start chatting and Rayne and Deacon give a sigh of relief.

It is at about this point that Nigel enters the room, and things go silent for a second. Nigel is bearing large scars over his left eye from the incident with Deacon, and it is the first time that everyone except for Diamond has seen them. Diamond tries to ease the air by greeting him in as jovial a tone as she can manage. The silence returns, only to be broken by Rayne's exclamation of concern and inquiry of the origin of her father's scars.

Nigel cocks his head slightly, and in a somewhat mocking tone asks her if Deacon never told her. Deacon retaliates; "you remember when we ran away for a few months because your (Rayne's) father tried to rip his (Deacon's) soul in half? Let's just say that they were a going-away present"

Tempers flare, and Diamond, sweet and civil as pie, interrupts them both by suggesting they sit down for some tea.

Rage turns to strict obedience in an instant, and Deacon runs off to put the kettle on, while Nigel sets out to prepare them a table. Adamas is dumbstruck, and asks Diamond how she just did that. Diamond tells him that it requires the right combination of a mother's love and a swordmaster's wrath.

Shortly thereafter, the group of them sit down at a private table in the dojo for some tea. First and foremost, Nigel and Deacon settle their score; neither meant to hurt the other, but in haste and shortsightedness or panic and fear they, however unintentionally, hurt each other. Needless to say, Diamond played he role of strict moderator for course of that discussion.

With that out of the way, the discussion turns to what happened with the children while they were away. A brief recap follows, which includes the death of Lilith, the betrayal of Sammael, meeting Adamas, and then retrieving the Legacy Sword, including the foulness surrounding Adamas' theft and the fight with the two guards.

Nigel and Diamond recount their experiences; she found him after he had been injured by Deacon and patched him up. Being injured and not wanting to be away when the children returned, he had to turn down an expedition to go out East.

Deacon interjects that he has healed and we are back safely, so why not come on an expedition with them instead. Nigel asks them where they intend to go. Admas tells him that they were hoping he could tell is that, Their objective is Sammael, and the Demon within him. Seeing as how Nigel was the one who tracked him down last time, that he might be up to do it again.

Nigel refuses, stating that it would be impossible. On his previous encounter with the demon, he was the one who discovered it, and he had the foresight to cast a tracking ward on the demon. Since it has since switched bodies his ward is useless, plus it has long since run out of mana to sustain itself.

Nigel tells them that Deacon should be able to sense the Demon at some range due ti his demonic natural demons have a natural affinity for magic and can sense each other innately.

Deacon interjects that he has never had any unusual ability to sense magic, and even when he met his father, he did not sense anything unnatural about him. Nigel responds that he does fact have an unusual ability to sense magic, he is on par with if not better than Rayne at seeing through illusions despite her lifetime of training versus his never-even-had-a-lesson at breaking them; back when he was a petty thief, he always had an eye for enchanted goods that exceeded random change; and as for not sensing anything from the Demon, it is likely that his demon blood was suppressed during his captivity – this is essentially a guess, but it makes sense that they wouldn't leave such a potential loose cannon metaphorically loaded with gunpowder and ammunition.

If he still has his doubts, they can put him to the test. Deacon and Rayne are instructed to sit down, and out of an assortment of identical looking objects, identify which of them have been enchanted. Deacon's ability quickly shines through, as Rayne's slower method of scrying each of them is no match for the ability to identify them en masse.

His point proven, Nigel begins preparation for their departure. Curious as to why he is so eager to see them off, Deacon asks him. Nigel responds that he knows his daughter very well, and once she has her mind set on something, neither Hell nor high water is going to stop her, and she is determined to help you to whatever end you so choose.

Deacon solemnly thanks Nigel for his (n) support in this matter, the whole thing has changed his (d) world, and having his (n) trust means a lot to him (d). Nigel levels with him (d), the two of them haven't really had much face time together, and he (n) has seen the mayhem caused by the Demon firsthand, and learning that Deacon was the son of such a creature was a shock, and to be perfectly honest, he (n) doesn't really trust him (d). However, he (n) knows that Rayne trusts him (d) and believes in him (d), and he (n) trusts his (n) daughter's insight and love more than his (n) own prejudice; that being said though, betray or hurt her and you (d) will live to regret it. Deacon laughs this off, replying "no I won't, as she would have the first shot at him (d), and she can be meaner than you (n)!" Nigel just tells him (d) to keep an eye on her and watch out for her.

They depart to the next room, where Diamond and Rayne are saying their goodbyes amidst hugging and mild crying.

Eventually Deacon and Rayne leave; the adults see them off, filled with the combination of pride and sandess that birds feel as their young fly out of their nest. Amidst their sentiments lies that their fears are allayed by the fact that they have each other; referring to both generations interdependence on their respective partner.

As Nigel and Diamond go inside to console each other, Deacon and Rayne come to the realization that they really don't know where they are going. Despite Nigel's assurance to the contrary, Deacon does not sense any trace of his father. Adamas suggests getting to a better vantage point, such as a mountain or tower in order to get a better scope of view. He suggest going back to his old tavern, as it resides on a mountain pass, and a wealth of information passes through there.

Despite the risk of running into Sleeping Dragons, they really don't have any better ideas; besides which Adamas has a cache of gold and supplies hidden there that could prove helpful. As for why he didn't use it before, he hadn't counted on the foul business with the Clan, and he's only getting it now so that the Clan doesn't get it first.

When they arrive, they take it slowly and cautiously; Adamas goes in first, and signals the kids to come in once he has determined the coast to be clear. Once inside, you are promptly ambushed and disarmed. The Clansmen that captured you have some exchanges with you, and you learn that Sammael has returned to the Clan, and will lead them forward to a new and prosperous age for them.

Deacon's ability to use magic without any items allows them to escape their captivity, and now knowing where to find the Demon, they resume their campaign. They know that the entire Clan will be against them, as based on the Demon's past exploits, his first objective was to neutralize any threats to him, and that makes them the prime candidates. Having established himself as the leader of the Sleeping Dragons, he will use their mighty resources to oppose them.

The Demon will most likely be in the Sleeping Dragon's headquarters, so they make their final preparations to stealthily attack it. The journey is long and arduous, but they arrive at last.

They make their way to the council room, which seats the highest ranking Fangs in the Clan against a mighty hallway.  

[This is as far as I have written the plot so far. It is quickly approaching climax, and I know that I want it to end with:]

...and the Demon dies laughing.

Until next time,

-Colin Souva

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